Write a few laughs in
For the first time in five times, I wrote, “The shopkeeper has a fierce face, and the customers have no good manners, which makespeople lively; Only when Kong Yiji arrives at the store can he laugh a few times. The word “smile” is highlighted here, which not only causes suspense, but also traps the full text.
Highlighting “laughter” in a cold atmosphere shows that this “laughter” vocal cord has a cold meaning. The second time is Kong Yiji Guo’s appearance. The drinkers make fun of Kong Yiji’s scar, that is, they make fun of Kong Yiji’s misfortune andpain, and sketch out the faces of thesepeople who are insensitive,poor and bored. There is a sense of sadness in their laughter. The drinkers also made fun of Kong Yiji’s stealing books, and Kong Yiji’s self-deception rebuttal attracted everyone to laugh. The third time, drinkers made fun of Kong Yiji. “Even half a scholar couldn’t catch Kong Yiji’s upset appearance and even the incomprehensible words caused everyone to laugh. The article focuses on rendering the sound of laughter and happy air, and the laughter is repeated, which makes the sad meaning evenstronger. The fourth time, Kong Yiji gave Jane fragrant beans to the children, so that they could get carried away and have fun in front of young and ignorant children, so this. The children were separated in laughter. Kong Yiji waspedantic and laughed to death by his actions and language. The children’s laughter is innocent. The fifth time was Kong Yiji’s second appearance, and Kong Yiji’s leg was broken, which was out of shape. However, the shopkeeper still made fun of Kong Yiji as usual. This kind of laughter is more and more sad and inhuman, and it shows the relationshipbetweenpeople in society at that time. Cold and heartless to thepoint of suffocation.
How many times have you written this text about Lu Xun’s appearance?
The full text describes Lu Xun’s appearance three times, all of which highlight his “thinness” but good spirit. It highlights the lofty quality of his whole life dedicated to the cause of human revolution. The order of the three descriptions of appearance is from far to near, from coarse to fine, from whole topart, which makes the image of Mr. Lu Xun gradually full and clear with the author’s observation and feeling. The first time in the distance, secretly, “I” inadvertently “looked at it”, so the image of the character was “vague”, just a rough outline of the figure, age, nationality, clothing and smoking attitude of the character as a whole. This time, it focuses on the outline, but the main feature of Mr. Lu Xun’s “thinness” has been veryprominent. The second close-up, Ming Li, is a conscious observation, and the description is more specific and meticulous, focusing on the face and spirit of the characters, and writing the temperament and mental state of the characters from being fascinated by form and spirit: thin, but with good spirit. It focuses on depicting the image of aproletarian cultural warrior who is thin in appearance and tenacious in spirit. The third relative is a close-up. The author looked at Mr. Lu Xun face to face, “amazed”, not only observing more carefully, but also writing upthe subtle features that were not observed in theprevious two times. For example, for the first time, I only saw that the gown was the color of “tooth yellow”, and for the third time, even the material was “feather yarn”. For the first time, I only saw the sparks and smoke on the cigarette holder. For the third time, even the cigarette holder was “yellow” and the end of the cigarette was “blackened”. For the third time, the head and the whole body of the character were combined to make the image of Mr. Lu Xun more complete and clear. Focused on expressing my reverence.